Editing TobaccoControl Tactics:About

Disclaimer: This website was created by private citizens in their own spared time, for their own private funds. The authors have no economic conflicts of interests and no affiliations with any vested interests, like fx. tobacco- or pharmaceutical companies.

The website was launched as a reaction on a [http://tobaccotactics.org UK initiative by the University of Bath] and the Tobacco Control lobby that attacks bloggers who have criticized them in the past.

With this site we want to create a gateway that makes it easier for anyone to find critical published information about the worldwide Tobacco Control organizations.
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-Disclaimer: This website was created by private citizens in their own spare time, with their own private funds. The authors have no economic conflicts of interest and no affiliations with any vested interests, such as tobacco or pharmaceutical companies.
+Disclaimer: This website was created by private citizens in their own spared time, for their own private funds. The authors have no economic conflicts of interests and no affiliations with any vested interests, like fx. tobacco- or pharmaceutical companies.
-The website was launched as a reaction to [http://tobaccotactics.org UK initiative by the University of Bath] and the Tobacco Control Industry, which attacks bloggers who have criticized them in the past.
+The website was launched as a reaction on a [http://tobaccotactics.org UK initiative by the University of Bath] and the Tobacco Control lobby that attacks bloggers who have criticized them in the past.
-With this site we want to create a gateway that makes it easier for anyone to find critical information about the activities and tactics of the global Tobacco Control Industry.
+With this site we want to create a gateway that makes it easier for anyone to find critical published information about the worldwide Tobacco Control organizations.