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| − | My entry definitely needs improvement both grammatically, for clarity and for formatting it properly. It would be nice if Table 2 from the CDC link at the bottom can be loaded as a chart. I don't know how. Can someone please have a look at it and work on it using the base of these arguments? | + | My entry in ''smoking is the leading avoidable cause of mortality'' definitely needs improvement both grammatically, for clarity and for formatting it properly. It would be nice if Table 2 from the CDC link at the bottom can be loaded as a chart. I don't know how. Can someone please have a look at it and work on it using the base of these arguments? (Iro) |
Revision as of 04:23, 13 June 2012
My entry in smoking is the leading avoidable cause of mortality definitely needs improvement both grammatically, for clarity and for formatting it properly. It would be nice if Table 2 from the CDC link at the bottom can be loaded as a chart. I don't know how. Can someone please have a look at it and work on it using the base of these arguments? (Iro)
