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My entry in ''smoking is the leading avoidable cause of mortality'' definitely needs improvement both grammatically, for clarity and for formatting it properly. It would be nice if Table 2 from the CDC link at the bottom can be loaded as a chart. I don't know how. Can someone please have a look at it and work on it using the base of these arguments? (Iro) | My entry in ''smoking is the leading avoidable cause of mortality'' definitely needs improvement both grammatically, for clarity and for formatting it properly. It would be nice if Table 2 from the CDC link at the bottom can be loaded as a chart. I don't know how. Can someone please have a look at it and work on it using the base of these arguments? (Iro) | ||
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I guess this is what you intended, Iro? --[[User:Wiel|Wiel]] ([[User talk:Wiel|talk]]) 15:14, 13 June 2012 (CEST) | I guess this is what you intended, Iro? --[[User:Wiel|Wiel]] ([[User talk:Wiel|talk]]) 15:14, 13 June 2012 (CEST) | ||
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| + | It's better but I will continue working on it. Thx for the chart but the title Malignant Neoplasms should not be there. (Iro) | ||
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| + | == Childhood exposures/illnesses == | ||
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| + | I just added some extensive notes about childhood exposure to smoke and its claimed relations to pneumonia, ear infections, SIDS etc. Feel free to correct anything! | ||
| + | :) | ||
| + | Michael | ||
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| + | ''The technology comes from Swiss ventilation company Airkel, and could well usher in a new era of comfortable smoking lounges.'' | ||
| + | --[[User:Wiel|Wiel]] ([[User talk:Wiel|talk]]) 04:18, 21 June 2012 (CEST) | ||
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| + | == Diabetic Men Face Impotence == | ||
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| + | Others is capable of a harder erection but cannot maintain it during sexual intercourse. He is content, and also the opposite of our thoughts old age has in store for us. | ||
Latest revision as of 19:10, 1 September 2017
My entry in smoking is the leading avoidable cause of mortality definitely needs improvement both grammatically, for clarity and for formatting it properly. It would be nice if Table 2 from the CDC link at the bottom can be loaded as a chart. I don't know how. Can someone please have a look at it and work on it using the base of these arguments? (Iro)
I guess this is what you intended, Iro? --Wiel (talk) 15:14, 13 June 2012 (CEST)
It's better but I will continue working on it. Thx for the chart but the title Malignant Neoplasms should not be there. (Iro)
Childhood exposures/illnesses[edit]
I just added some extensive notes about childhood exposure to smoke and its claimed relations to pneumonia, ear infections, SIDS etc. Feel free to correct anything!
:)
Michael
Link not working[edit]
In:
The technology comes from Swiss ventilation company Airkel, and could well usher in a new era of comfortable smoking lounges. --Wiel (talk) 04:18, 21 June 2012 (CEST)
Diabetic Men Face Impotence[edit]
Others is capable of a harder erection but cannot maintain it during sexual intercourse. He is content, and also the opposite of our thoughts old age has in store for us.
