Difference between revisions of "Talk:Sound Bites"
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I guess this is what you intended, Iro? --[[User:Wiel|Wiel]] ([[User talk:Wiel|talk]]) 15:14, 13 June 2012 (CEST) | I guess this is what you intended, Iro? --[[User:Wiel|Wiel]] ([[User talk:Wiel|talk]]) 15:14, 13 June 2012 (CEST) | ||
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Revision as of 23:40, 13 June 2012
My entry in smoking is the leading avoidable cause of mortality definitely needs improvement both grammatically, for clarity and for formatting it properly. It would be nice if Table 2 from the CDC link at the bottom can be loaded as a chart. I don't know how. Can someone please have a look at it and work on it using the base of these arguments? (Iro)
I guess this is what you intended, Iro? --Wiel (talk) 15:14, 13 June 2012 (CEST)
It's better but I will continue working on it. Thx for the chart but the title Malignant Neoplasms should not be there. (Iro)
