Talk:Sound Bites

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My entry in smoking is the leading avoidable cause of mortality definitely needs improvement both grammatically, for clarity and for formatting it properly. It would be nice if Table 2 from the CDC link at the bottom can be loaded as a chart. I don't know how. Can someone please have a look at it and work on it using the base of these arguments? (Iro)

I guess this is what you intended, Iro? --Wiel (talk) 15:14, 13 June 2012 (CEST)

It's better but I will continue working on it. Thx for the chart but the title Malignant Neoplasms should not be there. (Iro)

Childhood exposures/illnesses[edit]

I just added some extensive notes about childhood exposure to smoke and its claimed relations to pneumonia, ear infections, SIDS etc. Feel free to correct anything!

:)

Michael

Link not working[edit]

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The technology comes from Swiss ventilation company Airkel, and could well usher in a new era of comfortable smoking lounges. --Wiel (talk) 04:18, 21 June 2012 (CEST)

Diabetic Men Face Impotence[edit]

Others is capable of a harder erection but cannot maintain it during sexual intercourse.  He is content, and also the opposite of our thoughts old age has in store for us.